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Inwang-San

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taking all my studies into a final comprehensive study. Next up, a full size painting (I hope). 3x5" cold press canson paper with watercolors.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I like the simple mood of this piece and the colour tones. The shapes of the trees are interesting and their colour and texture are really well done and it was this that attracted me to your work. On closer inspection I find the pencil lines above the left mountain slightly distracting and painting to the lines would have obscured them more (or possibly using lighter pencil marks to guide you). Also, the building doesn't seem to sit well within the scene, in fact leaving it out might have led to better composition focusing on the trees and their trunks that make sympathetic parallels with the mountain in the background. I hope this isnt too harsh because I actually quite like your work.